Alexis, I think you did a great job creating your response by hand. I'm not sure if you did it intentionally but it seems as if you were trying to relate the burial mounds to the ritual center but it's not strong. Also, how does the line relate to your topic? What was the point of the artifacts? I think you didn't need to add them and foucs more on the shape and structure that seems to be more prominent.
Alexis, I think you did a great job creating your response by hand. I'm not sure if you did it intentionally but it seems as if you were trying to relate the burial mounds to the ritual center but it's not strong. Also, how does the line relate to your topic? What was the point of the artifacts? I think you didn't need to add them and foucs more on the shape and structure that seems to be more prominent.
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